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First attempt at poems
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Ive never even attempted poetry before this, but it was 3am, i was wide awake, and just felt like opening up notepad and seeing what i felt like writing. They are all very short poems, only a few lines, but meh *shrugs* ![]() So just see what you think, comments appreciated .1. Falling, just falling Through this abyss we call a life, a dream, a soul Knowing its all to come Waiting, just waiting Clinging to the hope of a better day to come Fading, just fading As the hope drifts away And the darkness comes Once, again. 2. Hopes, dreams, fears Need to be shared yet they cannot what can we do but hope, dream, and fear. 3. Once a new day arises The darkness fades away Sun breaks through what once seemed like an eternity A new hope For hope is all we have in this world of light and dark. 4. Destiny, not knowing what is to come That is the joy of life That is the curse of life Loving, Hating, Fighting We all are the same, we all are different Yet we can never truly know The depths of what we hold inside. 5. Searching for, that one thing to keep what is dark away Praying for, that one person who can hope, care and most of all, love. This ad goes away when you register. |
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another emo kid.............jkn.......
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