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    Cool Time to get rhyming! ...What, you don't rhyme? Well anyhow, let the Poet out NOW!


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    Dear reader,

    Well I did see frequent use of poetry & rhymes amongst some members at Indigo Society, so I thought: "Let them have a ball right at my Poetry Point!!" ...So this is my

    POETRY POINT!!

    Go ahead and express yourself anyway you wish, with words that have a cosmetic ring to them.

    This is a little rhyme I created right now (yes I improvised one to add some weight to this topic ):

    ------------------------------------------------------------

    Digging deep

    I feel like an ancient, but much I know not
    I know I'm here again, the rest I forgot
    How can we be one, if all is widely spread
    If you think you're me, then it's all in your head

    Give me a reason why some know of wonders
    That one understands and the other one ponders
    Should one know at all why things are this way
    Or is it pure instinct we should let out to play

    Knowing some knowledge can mean endless pain
    Facing fundamentals may render insane
    Consider it's possible you shouldn't know
    The "why", the "how" and the "where should we go"

    It's not entirely out of place to feel like you're new
    Though ages of indigo can make you feel blue
    We're too young to comprehend without a sense of dread
    Don't dig too deep in mystery, or you might end up dead


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    Hehehe... I'm just teasing, don't take it too seriously...
    This is a vague poem/rhyme anyway.

    Well, good luck!!
    Last edited by Marcus Rex; 10-11-2007 at 12:35 AM.
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    Talking

    Is there something about this topic
    Maybe you don't know what to do
    Let me know if you have some words for me
    I hope they're not "F**K YOU"

    Come on, put your tongue to rhyme
    And let your fingers do the typing
    One day you'll come back and wet your pants ha haa
    So it won't be tears you'll be wiping
    Last edited by Marcus Rex; 10-11-2007 at 12:36 AM.
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    haha my brother nice topic indeed
    i swung down low
    for stasis one nigth
    giving the rancid heed by dealing blows of ligth
    toxins are fuming, drowsiness drooling

    sit on my hands to sit tigth
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    have to think up a few but i sometimes tinker.... *tries here muse*
    Live life, but don't get lived by.
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    Wink

    Rhyme, rhyme, rhyme as we go
    Go with the flow, yo ho, ow no
    Rhyming each word
    It's not that absurd when you row, row, row up the hill
    Then lay down and chill if you will, hehee

    ...Now go rhyme for me!
    Leave me alone.
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    this ain't a poem but I must say you have a remarkable semblance to the lead singer from the band "Godsmack" from your avatar pick anyhow
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    haha changes every day
    as I sit and ponder
    world makes me wonder
    why there is a thing called cold
    who made the thought of the eart and mold

    I know all the answers now
    no need for a pow pow

    why am I so fukkin bored
    there are things need to be explored
    dont feel like do a thing
    except then sing
    hard loud and dirty
    hiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

    yeah thats the life of a bored indigo
    stop wining and go dining
    shit I have obsebitas
    yeah I like a big fat ass

    riming in english is a bid hard
    that's all in the part
    of this lovely forum
    love strawberry gum

    pity I don't eat sugar
    learnin to drive a car
    it rocks big time
    and ya know
    my cardriver was a militair in the war

    you should think that dont go well
    in that tiny car at the road
    well he's cool and honest
    that what I like

    Ive build a house for max the cat
    from old boxes from the supermarket
    he played in it
    and i laughed

    cause max is crazy
    and very lazy

    he's on a diet too
    booooooooooooooo
    he snors loud

    well better less food and a tummy to tickle
    then a ton of food and no need for legs cause ya cant walk

    \i walk everyday
    not on high heels cause I fall
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    Love is all there was, is and ever will be
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    Glow *~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~* is a name known to all *~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~* is a name known to all *~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~* is a name known to all *~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~* is a name known to all *~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~* is a name known to all *~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~* is a name known to all *~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~*'s Avatar
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    I needed some time
    to think of a rhyme
    that expressed the way I feel.
    My head isn't here
    My heart is in fear
    The pain is just too real.
    I sit on the porch
    And smoke like a torch
    To forget about the pain.
    I admire the tree
    and I cry with the sea
    Because I hear her calling my name.
    I look to the stars
    And watch all the cars
    Just to see if he's there,
    I call out to Earth
    and I ask for re-birth
    Just so my heart can bare.
    "..although I'd like to join the crowd, in their enthusiastic cloud, try as I may it doesn't last."-Sally's song.
    "Stand up for what you believe is right, even if you're standing .ALONE."

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    can we psot things we've already written?
    I like the freestylin' we have going on here, though.
    Haha, just wondering.
    Because the one above. i jkust made up on the spot.
    Last edited by *~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~*; 10-14-2007 at 11:51 AM.
    "..although I'd like to join the crowd, in their enthusiastic cloud, try as I may it doesn't last."-Sally's song.
    "Stand up for what you believe is right, even if you're standing .ALONE."

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    Holy Light

    Looking up into the stars,
    Past the twilight holding bars,
    Here you'll see a glowing light,
    Take bad dream and turn them light.

    Sleep so sound,
    Under snow laden roofes,
    Like the child so you,
    Like holy light.

    -----------------------------------

    Is it?

    As we stare into space,we know not the future we all share.

    The skies will all turn blue,and the grass as green as ever.

    As our hearts beat one by one,love enters our souls.

    Give this some thought.
    Think very clearly,now.

    Is it all really worth the fight?
    Fighting to hate, I mean.

    Is it now my dears?

    Our hearts all beat and our eyes all stare.

    Now give this some thought,
    is it realy worth the fight?
    Last edited by Karshinjutsu; 10-14-2007 at 02:42 PM. Reason: misspelling
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    i think i saw a little man today
    he was sitting by the brick wall
    he was wearing a coat of pure sunlight
    on his feet were nothing at all

    i said man my man how you do?
    he smiled and smiled until i knew
    when one wheres no clothes all
    one sees right through your little wall
    oooommmmmm
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    weareone,that was absolutely beautiful.I adore your first poem,and the second was very much a beautifuly discriptive vision.Here's some more.
    Little Leaf
    The leaf that fell this morning never moved at all.
    I felt in some way just so very small.
    The buzzing of my hand,
    Was my wake-up call,
    For then I realised my staring,
    And then,
    There was no leaf at all.

    ----------------------------------------

    The Friend

    Lightly brushing my best friends hair,
    I thought to my self.
    She's growing up fast.
    Where would she be,
    And where would I see,
    Her lovely hair again.

    Looking up from my desk,
    I saw a color from only once before.
    Yes,it had been a long time.
    I saw her here,
    Even though she was gone,
    I saw her here,
    Even though she was long gone.
    That hair in ringlets,
    Fading away,
    There stood,
    My friend,
    We've come a long way.




    I hope these ones are ok,and once again,I loved your poems weareone.
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    this page has the beauty of a thousand sunsets
    lighting up my soul
    the crystals vibrate in my hand mellowing my thoughts
    the faraway cries of the gull creates the silence
    turning, churning pounding, and resting
    sleepless while dreaming i watch the roses
    they bloom making love with the sunshine

    to all the creators
    oooommmmmm
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    Quote Originally Posted by *~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~* View Post
    I needed some time
    to think of a rhyme
    that expressed the way I feel.
    My head isn't here
    My heart is in fear
    The pain is just too real.
    I sit on the porch
    And smoke like a torch (this one's making me curious... is it... this...?)
    To forget about the pain. (...because of this...)
    I admire the tree
    and I cry with the sea
    Because I hear her calling my name.
    I look to the stars
    And watch all the cars
    Just to see if he's there, (that's definitely a she for me )
    I call out to Earth
    and I ask for re-birth
    Just so my heart can bare.
    WOW...! I like this poem from the core of my heart. Yes I do.
    Leave me alone.
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    Quote Originally Posted by weareone View Post
    this page has the beauty of a thousand sunsets
    lighting up my soul
    the crystals vibrate in my hand mellowing my thoughts
    the faraway cries of the gull creates the silence
    turning, churning pounding, and resting
    sleepless while dreaming i watch the roses
    they bloom making love with the sunshine

    to all the creators
    As I spot this particular avatar I immediately notice the subtle beauty of chosen words... Decorating the moment.
    Last edited by Marcus Rex; 10-15-2007 at 04:53 AM.
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    Quote Originally Posted by *~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~* View Post
    can we psot things we've already written?
    I like the freestylin' we have going on here, though.
    Haha, just wondering.
    Because the one above. i jkust made up on the spot.
    PLEASE, DO YOUR THANG!! This goes for everyone! Until some moderator decides to ruin things here (hey there, moderator, how's it hangin'...?) everyone can come here and post their rhymes and poems... Even if it's just ONE sentence! Let this digital thread be a Testimony of Verbal Creativity! Break the rules because they can be broken, so that which can't be broken remains... the Essence of Perpetually Dynamic Existence... aka Life.
    Last edited by Marcus Rex; 10-15-2007 at 06:17 AM.
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    haha.. yes Marcus, that is what its about. Here's one I wrote in honor of that comment. haha, you'll enjoy this. Wrote this one up on the spot too, ill post one I've already writtten later..

    Let me put you to my lips
    breath you in, just like your kiss
    Sunset doesn't compare to your sin
    The way you make my lungs sink in
    It all goes straight to my head
    It gives a reason to climb out of bed.
    You heal me, with your Aura, so green.
    Your cloud surrounds me, just like a dream.
    Bought you from the boy next door,
    He spreads you out just like a whore.
    We pick on you, to make you thin.
    We break you down so you'll fit in.
    But, we all love you just the same,
    thats why we call you Mary Jane.
    Last edited by *~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~*; 10-15-2007 at 03:27 PM.
    "..although I'd like to join the crowd, in their enthusiastic cloud, try as I may it doesn't last."-Sally's song.
    "Stand up for what you believe is right, even if you're standing .ALONE."

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    aaahhh mother mary

    and so i go
    what? to where
    to the moon you see
    for there i am freeeeee
    oooommmmmm
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