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    Rock It,My Style!

    Hey,This is Karshinjutsu with my newest obsession in the art catagory,Rapping!I know,I know....In squeaky voice"Rap is the center of all evil!Noooo we mustn't let it into our liiiiiiiiives!!!!!".Hey,that's just what I thought until a spirit told me I'd be good at it(I even started listening to the music a while now).Yah know what,I am!Here are some songs I've written in class in the past week.With some after commentary by me(By the Bye,My solo artist name is Carthaginian Tactics).

    1.Rebecca's Song

    Uhn,Dis is a song about a girl I once knew.
    Placed in the wrong family,
    With nowhere to go.
    It was whearing her down,
    Till she cracked.
    With nothing left,
    She died inside,
    And I was the reason she cried.

    Rebecca,Rebecca
    A general name,
    Till you add to the end a feeling or frame.
    Cause and effect was the name of the game.
    And I was the one to cause all of the shame.


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    Her teachers asked why she wasn't in class the next day.
    Soon the crayons in her desk began to decay.
    This was the beginning of the mess she'd gotten herself into.
    Emotions too high,
    No longer so loving.
    She held up a shield to mask the self-loathing.

    Rebecca,Rebecca
    A general name,
    Till you add to the end a feeling or frame.
    Cause and effect was the name of the game.
    And I was the one to cause all of the shame.

    Rebecca,Rebecca
    A general name,
    Till you add to the end a feeling or frame.
    Cause and effect was the name of the game.
    And I was the one to cause all of the shame.

    Rebecca,Rebecca,
    Just a shadow today.
    Elementary lines crumble,
    But they are still held up by prays.
    Rebecca,Rebecca,
    Hollow in every way.
    In her own mind,
    She isn't O-Kay.
    __________________________________________________
    So,This one is about a girl who used to be my best friend.I knew her family wasn't quite right,but I guess when I left her alone she just cracked cause she didn't have anyone else.The girl showed up less and less at school till she just stopped showing.Bless you,girl.I hope your okay.
    Hey,anyway,Did'ya like it?It may just be a bit too strange to think of a girl rapping,huh?
    Last edited by Karshinjutsu; 03-11-2008 at 06:51 PM.
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