Lust not Love poem :p

[ScatterBrain]

(Gotta read it carefully)

The tender touch of innocent lips
They be not parched; they be not wet

The whelming thought that conquers mind
Beats to life on cue, here every time


With no planed thought up in the air
Removes the garment, now so bare

Soothing link, warm hands cold waist
Overwhelmed euphoria, midst the endless gaze

As dares to touch such sacred place
Stabbed by lust not love be this called fake

Stood at the calm before the godless swell
Forwards the challenge, seems heaven deemed hell

Head angles up from horizontal holding back a scream
Alarm clocks ringing, it was just a FUCKING dream!

[thenomadicartist]

Hahahaha, wet dreams.

NICE!

I like your writing style too...mainly because it's somewhat like mine in a way =P

[justin]

Damnit, I hate it when that happens. It makes me feel so disappointed. Funny poem, nice one.

[Sedate Solution]

Classic ! ! !

[ScatterBrain]

i wrote this a long time ago for "iGlowOFIndigo"

[*~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~*]

??? did u really write this for me?

[ScatterBrain]

rofl. wow, your quick off the mark

[ScatterBrain]

what if i did?

[*~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~*]

no its really weird why i even opened this thread. this is the first time ive even seen it. i saw it on the recently replied thing.
i hope its not for me, to be honest.

[ScatterBrain]

well, is it such a crime to say since the day you enterd my existance on indigo chat, you have been on my mind for every single part of my life ever since?

[*~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~*]

??? really?
Thats very interesting.
Not sure how to take that, but I also find that in my jumbled up mind that I manage to think about most everyone I feel connected with, each day

[ScatterBrain]

yeah yeah, i bet me the most

[*~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~*]

sorry to burst your bubble...
but not at all, lol.
But thanks for thinking of me, if you REALLY do.
I've never really had anyone admit that to me except for one other boy,
and i have never really admitted to someone that i thought about them a lot, unless they asked.
Hmmm.
I'm not sure what to say. Because I can't figure out if you really meant it, or if you just want to stir something up...
maybe both.
I don't know if i should be flattered, or not. You always acted like you hated me. ha.

[ScatterBrain]

but i thoughted u hated me? funny

[*~i GlOw 0F iNdIgO~*]

nahh.
this is all just...interesting to me.
I wanna know why you brought up my name months later, lol.
Maybe thats why i still dont think it was written for me, haha.

[ScatterBrain]

lol, yeah maybe u just a bit to supsetive in ways. I tell you realy but, i always thought u amazing person and so full of good stuff and shit its not funny... And to top it off you incredibly beautiful... "Perfect, even in your flawless imperfections..."

[ScatterBrain]

and what ever, u too socialy insecure to worry abouyt, forget u